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cain
Blighted Sun Battalion
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heres another one i need to finish the fluff so any help would be appreciated
BattleMech Technical Readout
Carmen
Mass: 100 tons
Chassis: Standard
Power Plant: 300 XL
Cruising Speed: 32.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 54.0 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Standard
Armament: 7
2 Artemis IV FCS
2 Type XXVI "Great Bow" LRM-20
6 Series PPS-VIII Medium Pulse Lasers
2 Series 6b ER Large Laser
2 Series 2a Mk. 5 ER Medium Lasers
2 Pattern JX Streak SRM-4
1 ECM Suite
Manufacturer(s): 1
Unknown
Communications System: C-XII Series B4 GDS
Targeting & Tracking System: C-12 Mk. III with Artemis IV FCS
Overview: 10
named after the celtic god of destruction the Carmen
is well suited to its role and name. The Carmen is most
certinaly capable of destroying another mech even after
its
ammo has run out. It can even rely on its huge fists if
necassary. The ghost bear Kahn called for a mech to be
created to command the field and the battle. Its fire power
is geared towards longrange as the mech was designed to
command the battle group and then slowly advance to
crush what was left of the enemy
Type: Carmen
Technology Base: Clan Custom
Tonnage: 100
Equipment Mass
Internal Structure: 10.0
Engine: 300 XL 9.5
Walking MP: 3
Running MP: 5
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 18 [36] 8
Gyro: 3
Cockpit: 3
Armor Factor: 312 19.5
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 31 47
Center Torso (Rear): 15
R/L Torso: 21 32
R/L Torso (Rear): 10
R/L Arm: 17 34
R/L Leg: 21 42
BV : 2565 Cost : 24794000
Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Heat Mass
ECM Suite H 1 0 1.0
ER Large Laser CT 1 12 4.0
ER Large Laser CT 1 12 4.0
LRM-20 RT 4 6 5.0
LRM-20 LT 4 6 5.0
@Streak SRM-4 (25) RT 1 0 1.0
@Streak SRM-4 (25) LT 1 0 1.0
ER Medium Laser RA 1 5 1.0
ER Medium Laser LA 1 5 1.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Artemis IV FCS RT 1 0 1.0
Artemis IV FCS LT 1 0 1.0
@LRM-20 (18) LT 3 0 3.0
@LRM-20 (18) RT 3 0 3.0
Streak SRM-4 RT 1 3 2.0
Streak SRM-4 LT 1 3 2.0
*** ACTUATORS RA RH LA LH
*** HS LL1 RL1 LA2 RA2
*** END
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Beebles
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| Posted: 21-Apr-2005 09:47 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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Nice name there, Cain. We're rapidly running out of celtic mythology names for our mechs 
:edited for spelling:
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Erenon
Blighted Sun Battalion
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"Seraph's Slaughter"
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| Posted: 21-Apr-2005 10:16 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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On 2005-04-15 10:45, cain wrote:
heres another one i need to finish the fluff so any help would be appreciated
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How's this? I tried to use as much of your original fluff as i could..
Also max armour is 307.. not 312..
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Faced with the need for a Mech that could anchor its second-line battlegroups and bring heavy firepower to bear at long range, Clan Ghost Bear decided that a new Mech was the answer and set its scientists and technicians to the task.
The new Mech also had to be able to present a commanding presence on the battlefield.
Taking its name from the celtic god of destruction the Carmen is able to engage its foe from far with a pair each of ER Large Lasers and LRM-20s. 18 rounds of ammunition and Artemis fire control systems for each of the two large missile racks ensure maximum endurance and accuracy.
Up close, the Carmen can bring 6 devastating medium pulse lasers supported by two ER medium lasers. A volley of 8 Streak SRMs adds to the destruction it can unleash at close range.
The Carmen can also pummel its foes with its massive battlefists should they venture within their grasp.
To help protect the Carmen from advanced systems, its designers equipped with an advanced ECM suite.
All of this equipment is encased within 19.5 tons of armour, making the Carmen one of the most heavily protected mechs on the battlefield.
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cain
Blighted Sun Battalion
1st Company
"Ralgith's Renegades"
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Location: Canada
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 10:51 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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thanks Erenon that works perfectly the armor thing is an unavoidable flaw in the drawing board which i normally correct when posting this time i was in rush
here`s the revised post with erenon`s fluff
Carmen
Mass: 100 tons
Chassis: Standard
Power Plant: 300 XL
Cruising Speed: 32.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 54.0 km/h
Jump Jets: None
Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Standard
Armament: 7
2 Artemis IV FCS
2 Type XXVI "Great Bow" LRM-20
6 Series PPS-VIII Medium Pulse Lasers
2 Series 6b ER Large Laser
2 Series 2a Mk. 5 ER Medium Lasers
2 Pattern JX Streak SRM-4
1 ECM Suite
Manufacturer(s): 1
Unknown
Communications System: C-XII Series B4 GDS
Targeting & Tracking System: C-12 Mk. III with Artemis IV FCS
Overview: 10
Faced with the need for a Mech that could anchor its second-line battlegroups and bring heavy firepower to bear at long range, Clan Ghost Bear decided that a new Mech was the answer and set its scientists and technicians to the task.
The new Mech also had to be able to present a commanding presence on the battlefield.
Taking its name from the celtic god of destruction the Carmen is able to engage its foe from far with a pair each of ER Large Lasers and LRM-20s. 18 rounds of ammunition and Artemis fire control systems for each of the two large missile racks ensure maximum endurance and accuracy.
Up close, the Carmen can bring 6 devastating medium pulse lasers supported by two ER medium lasers. A volley of 8 Streak SRMs adds to the destruction it can unleash at close range.
The Carmen can also pummel its foes with its massive battle fists should they venture within their grasp.
To help protect the Carmen from advanced systems, its designers equipped with an advanced ECM suite.
All of this equipment is encased within 19.5 tons of armour, making the Carmen one of the most heavily protected mechs on the battlefield.
Type: Carmen
Technology Base: Clan Custom
Tonnage: 100
Equipment Mass
Internal Structure: 10.0
Engine: 300 XL 9.5
Walking MP: 3
Running MP: 5
Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks: 18 [36] 8
Gyro: 3
Cockpit: 3
Armor Factor: 307 19.5
Internal Armor
Structure Value
Head: 3 9
Center Torso: 31 47
Center Torso (Rear): 15
R/L Torso: 21 32
R/L Torso (Rear): 10
R/L Arm: 17 34
R/L Leg: 21 42
BV : 2565 Cost : 24794000
Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Heat Mass
ECM Suite H 1 0 1.0
ER Large Laser CT 1 12 4.0
ER Large Laser CT 1 12 4.0
LRM-20 RT 4 6 5.0
LRM-20 LT 4 6 5.0
@Streak SRM-4 (25) RT 1 0 1.0
@Streak SRM-4 (25) LT 1 0 1.0
ER Medium Laser RA 1 5 1.0
ER Medium Laser LA 1 5 1.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser LA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Medium Pulse Laser RA 1 4 2.0
Artemis IV FCS RT 1 0 1.0
Artemis IV FCS LT 1 0 1.0
@LRM-20 (18) LT 3 0 3.0
@LRM-20 (18) RT 3 0 3.0
Streak SRM-4 RT 1 3 2.0
Streak SRM-4 LT 1 3 2.0
*** ACTUATORS RA RH LA LH
*** HS LL1 RL1 LA2 RA2
*** END
Intel on this mech gathered by agent Erenon
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Erenon
Blighted Sun Battalion
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 11:50 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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Thanks Cain..
I'm now an agent.... gee does that mean i can take over people and reform them into my image 
Anytime.
Let me know if you need fluff. i'l try my best if i'm not stuck at work trying to rework articles...
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Stinger
The Knights of Chaos
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 12:48 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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Uno momento. 1 tiny problem with that fluff. Last time I checked the clans dont believe in physicals with mechs (granted lots has changed and I am behind on books so If it has changed my bad).
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Karagin
Imperial Karagin Army
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 15:36 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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They don't like it but they will respond in kind if the IS does so first.
But then again, I have yet to see folks play the Clans as 100% written. Normally you get the power gamers having to be the clan mechs...sorry that is a whole other topic...back to the one at hand.
Nice mech.
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bladewind
Free Rasalhague Republic
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 15:45 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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| still i seriously doubt a Warhawk can try returning the favor if an Atlas punches him.
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Karagin
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 18:06 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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On 2005-04-22 15:45, bladewind wrote:
still i seriously doubt a Warhawk can try returning the favor if an Atlas punches him.
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Why would it need to? Use the bloody TC it has and BOOM no more center torso or leg...down goes the Atlas.
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Erenon
Blighted Sun Battalion
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| Posted: 22-Apr-2005 20:23 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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I would normally agree with you, but it's arguable that a second-line warrior may not make that distinction if his/her life is in danger. Also, increasing contact with the Inner Sphere may change some opinions.
Lastly, this is the Ghost Bears, i dunno why.. but in my opinion if any of the Clans are willing to use physical combat if need be, it always struck me as either Clan Wolf or Clan Ghost Bear...
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cain
Blighted Sun Battalion
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| Posted: 23-Apr-2005 10:37 Post subject: RE: Carmen |
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heres a nice piece of footage i found a few months back
as for the physicals it is more as all last resort.
http://www.kerensky.tierranet.com/btech/battleroms/rm/gbattack.ram
 or what
[ This Message was edited by: cain on 2005-04-23 10:39 ]
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