Posted: 26-Apr-2002 19:21 Post subject: Help me write fluff for the Star Wolf!!!!
I write fluff and nobody will post opinions so I open the floor to you.Please help me get some fluff on this mech.Remember it is a quad!!!!!!
Feral
STW-A4 Star Wolf
Mass: 70 tons
Chassis: Crucis Type V
Power Plant: Omni 280
Cruising Speed: 43.2 km/h
Maximum Speed: 64.8 km/h
Jump Jets: Rawlings 75
Jump Capacity: 120 meters
Armor: DuraShield 12-b.1
Armament: 1
Unknown
Manufacturer(s): 1
Coventry Metal Works
Communications System: Sony MST-15
Targeting & Tracking System: Army Comp. Type 29K
Overview: 7
Primary:General Assault
Configuration A: Fire Support/
Configuration B: Urban Assault/Surgical Strike
Configuration C: Medium Range Assault
Configuration D: Anti-Infantry/Urban Assault
Configuration E:Fire Support(LVL 1)
Configuration F: Surgical Strike
Type: STW-A4 Star Wolf
Technology Base: Inner Sphere Level 2 Omni Custom
Tonnage: 70
Alternate Configuration D
BV : 1274 Cost : 10235950
Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Heat Mass
AP Pod LRL 1 0 0.5
AP Pod RRL 1 0 0.5
AP Pod LFL 1 0 0.5
AP Pod RFL 1 0 0.5
Autocannon/5 RT 4 1 8.0
@Autocannon/5 (40) RT 2 0 2.0
ER Large Laser LT 2 12 5.0
Streak SRM-2 CTR 1 2 1.5
Small Laser H 1 1 0.5
@Streak SRM-2 (50) CT 1 0 1.0
Alternate Configuration E
BV : 1472 Cost : 10501043
Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Heat Mass
Large Laser CT 2 8 5.0
LRM-15 RT 3 5 7.0
@LRM-15 (8) RT 1 0 1.0
SRM-6 LT 2 4 3.0
@SRM-6 (30) LT 2 0 2.0
Dbl Heat Sink(s) LT 3 0 1.0
CASE RT 1 0 0.5
CASE LT 1 0 0.5
Alternate Configuration F
BV : 1435 Cost : 11402043
Weapons and Ammo Location Critical Heat Mass
Narc Beacon LT 2 0 3.0
@Explosive Narc (12) LT 2 0 2.0
@Narc Beacon (6) LT 1 0 1.0
C3 Slave LT 1 0 1.0
Streak SRM-4 RT 1 3 3.0
@Streak SRM-4 (25) RT 1 0 1.0
ER Large Laser CT 2 12 5.0
Dbl Heat Sink(s) RT 3 0 1.0
ER Medium Laser RTR 1 5 1.0
ER Medium Laser LTR 1 5 1.0
CASE RT 1 0 0.5
CASE LT 1 0 0.5
Movement is a premium on this mech.Expanded movement of quads allows this mech to get places others just cant.Its weapon layouts allow for multiple mission profiles making it versatile for the commander controlling this asset.
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Posted: 26-Apr-2002 19:25 Post subject: Help me write fluff for the Star Wolf!!!!
Actually I've looked at everything you've posted and have been impressed, but I suck at writing fluff...or anything else for that matter. _________________ I'm not family friendly. That's why I don't post here.
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Posted: 01-May-2002 00:00 Post subject: Help me write fluff for the Star Wolf!!!!
I commented on all your mechs that I felt need a comment...and when you had fluff I commented...
Simple fluff rules, and yes I know they are not easy to answer or do...
Why is this mech needed?
What does it do and why does it do that job or jobs.
Who built it?
Where?
When?
Who uses it?
The answeres to those are the fluff...if you are trying to fit into the storyline 100% then you have your work cut out for you, if you want color to the mech then you can do just about anything you want in the fluff.
Best bet is to read some of the fluff, both offical TR fluff and some of what the folks here have posted and then try to land somewhere in between there.
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